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Kirk Jordan's avatar

Is the described rainstorm soft and misty. Or torrential? I thought the first, but then imagine the setting erased in blinding rains.

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odd note: your possessive apostrophes show us as colons in my text. Is it a platform issue, or IPhone v Android?

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Mark Rico's avatar

Both! It was soft rain on the way in then quickly turned torrential. When a colon takes the place of an apostrophe in this series, it:s a reference to the : key being in the spot on a Japanese keyboard where the ‘ key would be on an English keyboard. Other keys were placed differently as well, but my writing from that time has lots of colons.

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