01 • Haiku Sonnet whispering rain subdues clamoring streets— drops dampen sound water above and water beneath our feet— we cross the moat walking slowly through gardens we cannot see— monsoon season many-tiered shape carved into the curtain— shelter beckons centuries of memories struggle with modernity 02 • Imayo in a hush we near—antiquity:s aura bends and breaks on entrance—ancient doors reveal youth lit in fluorescence—neither stone nor torch to ease jarring dissonance—a sterile lacquered carcass 03 • Senryu we leave behind lost grandeur:s weeping ghosts— shadows cross the moat
Is the described rainstorm soft and misty. Or torrential? I thought the first, but then imagine the setting erased in blinding rains.
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odd note: your possessive apostrophes show us as colons in my text. Is it a platform issue, or IPhone v Android?