Haibun
A stunner Mark! Love it. The ku especially.
Thank you, Dick! I appreciate your encouragement, since I admire your depth when it comes to the Japanese forms.
Oh it's a pleasure Mark - the feeling is mutual - I really admire your use of the forms! You write some real bangers. <3
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Lovely poem (and photo). I was particularly caught by "grasping, grasping, grasping for ashes and straw."
Thank you! I really like this form.
A stunner Mark! Love it. The ku especially.
Thank you, Dick! I appreciate your encouragement, since I admire your depth when it comes to the Japanese forms.
Oh it's a pleasure Mark - the feeling is mutual - I really admire your use of the forms! You write some real bangers. <3
🙏
Lovely poem (and photo). I was particularly caught by "grasping, grasping, grasping for ashes and straw."
Thank you! I really like this form.