O God who walks along the somber halls / of hospitals, conducting spirits ...
Shhooooo. This one is special submit it somewhere or publish it one day in a book. Amazing!
Thanks for your encouragement, Zane! You're very kind.
Yep, nice adjustments. Excellent poem.
Thanks much, J!
calls
them gently from uneasy sleep into
a dream that scours all the dullness from
their eyes
.
Gentle, musical and consoling. Thank you, Mark.
Thanks for reading and for your kind words, Ann.
Shhooooo. This one is special submit it somewhere or publish it one day in a book. Amazing!
Thanks for your encouragement, Zane! You're very kind.
Yep, nice adjustments. Excellent poem.
Thanks much, J!
calls
them gently from uneasy sleep into
a dream that scours all the dullness from
their eyes
.
Gentle, musical and consoling. Thank you, Mark.
Thanks for reading and for your kind words, Ann.