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Zane Paxton's avatar

Shhooooo. This one is special submit it somewhere or publish it one day in a book. Amazing!

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Mark Rico's avatar

Thanks for your encouragement, Zane! You're very kind.

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J. Tullius's avatar

Yep, nice adjustments. Excellent poem.

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Mark Rico's avatar

Thanks much, J!

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Ann Collins's avatar

calls

them gently from uneasy sleep into

a dream that scours all the dullness from

their eyes

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Gentle, musical and consoling. Thank you, Mark.

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Mark Rico's avatar

Thanks for reading and for your kind words, Ann.

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