This month’s theme: “Where I Am: Poems of Place”
11/09 • Soil
This is blank verse – the meter is iambic pentameter but no rhymes are prescribed. If you’re reading on your phone, turning it sideways should eliminate any line-wrapping that breaks up the form.
— O God whose providence is small enough to count accumulating grains of sand, immense enough to heave the boulders from their streambed homes and measure mountains’ roots; to raise an eyebrow, crack the flimsy crust around the molten heart that beats beneath our feet; whose sandals carried hues like coded clues to all the roads you walked along the way to where your heart grew cold: be near us as our atoms sing their dirge diminishing as they return to dust. —
11/10 • Flora
This is a syllabic and internally rhyming Welsh form: cywydd llosgyrnog (kew-iith loss-gr-nog) (best guess) (I'm an amateur) (don’t quote me), which Google tells me means "a fiery poem." I cheated and added a syllable to the last line. You can probably see the syllable count and rhyme scheme. If it’s unclear to you, it goes like this:
8-xxxxxxxA
8-xxxxxxxA
7-xxxAxxB
8-xxxxxxxC
8-xxxxxxxC
7-xxxCxxB
— Some succulents will drop a leaf if you look at them funny, grief over a brief encounter with nothing meant amiss, a kiss of contact the yawning abyss. You’ve barely made this plant stir but evidently just enough to leave a mark. It’s after rough handling their true toughness shows. Leave the leaf alone on the dirt and watch blessing grow from hurt as it exerts its will to grow. —
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💛: "whose sandals carried hues
like coded clues to all the roads you walked".
I've had that experience with succulents and it's great (and moving) to see it laid out in a poem.
What a fun tutorial!