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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

I’ve lived through many a tropical storm/hurricane in my life (being from the DR) and the language in this poem resonated with me deeply!

I wrote a poem recently about willingly walking into the eye of a tropical storm… and how my prayer is to be like the palm trees. God crafted them uniquely to survive in hurricane-prone places—thin, tall, and fibrous trunks that bend and dance in crazy high winds.

Gracias for this poem, Mark! Always a big fan of your writing.

Abigail's avatar

The rhymes feel effortless. How you manage the sound and sense without it feeling forced is teaching me so much.

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